SMILE: AC:1 Informing ideas. Pitch feedback

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presentation 

In this post i have reviewed the feedback i was given on my rationale pitch from the questionnaire i gave people to answer and considered how the feedback will effect what i should include in my project. doing this will help me identify flaws in my idea and make adjustments where necessary.  

i got good feedback on my presentation skills and was told my speaking was very clear.


i also got good feedback on the time i presented my rational 
when asked what they would change about my presentation, i was told they would include more text and add a story board. This is important as it provides a visual aid to how the final product will look before it has been made. this is important to potential producers and investors as it makes them more confident and more likely to take on the production.

idea
my idea was well received and got good feedback. this will effect the production as i know i dont have to make any major changes to the plot. 
i asked in the survey that if they were a network executive, would they approve my rationale for production and was told yes as it fits well with codes and conventions and that the pitch was presented with care and productivity. 
when asked what they enjoyed about my idea i was told that; the voice over is a good idea and that it was detailed. this will influence my production because i now have confidence that the best option for the speaking portion of the advert is a voiceover as it was well received. 

Audience 
i was told that if the people included in the video are in the age bracket then it would be relatable therefore, i will need to make sure i consider that when shooting my footage

 

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